Because I wanted to...

Ohhhhh sad face :( That's pretty awesome, I felt like I got slapped in the face when those last two lines hit.

Thank you guys! I'm glad you all seem to have got exactly what I was feeling at the time I wrote it, which means I must of got something right ...

Of truth and virtue, Death and lies. This part in particular is my favorite just the way it sounds. The poem itself is so dark, I love it! It really ...

So in your face. love how intense it is for sure. I like the fast pace and beat as well. I hope I can learn to emanate that in my ...

mmmm heartbreak, such a motivator right? This kinda made me wanna cry a little. Just cause as you would put it I don't know and "my heart feels busted" I ...

I never thanked anyone for helping me with this poem. Thank you all so much! I didn't edit it too much just because it came from a lot emotions and ...

I love art myself, so I enjoy this. The only thing I would change is the fifth line up from the bottom. I'd make it "and some places are even ...

Thanks very much for the reviews I'm considering some of the advice I can't express how happy it made me that no ones hated it yet. Thank you again for ...

I'm not a poetry know-it-all but i like the poem, the only thing that bugs me is the way the lines are broken because it destracted me from the work ...

I'm am in love with this poem. The whole poem is filled with the pleasure of sin and passion and how that very passion that feels so good can lead ...